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Widow Starving, Man Still Thinking

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salted tongue, head aches
the widow starves
Love's economy crumbles
like bread loaves

never given -- just discussed. 


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I've noticed that my tongue keeps moving and my hands stay idle. I don't feel like that is the way life should be lived, guys. I want more than that from myself. 

It's been said that you must first change yourself to change the world and I am seriously trying to break some old habits, gaunt grudges and hateful ideas from my life, mind and body. The nucleus is my starting point; the family, you guys, my neighbors - the whole community. That is where I aim to begin this augmentation. Hopefully, with enough grace and dedication, I can regain some of that flame I've lost recently when it comes to unconditional love and a servant's heart. To be honest, I'm feeling really good right now about this. 


Thank you for the time, guys. 

- Tristan Cody. 

EDIT:

I recently edited this and took out the Spanish version because I felt like without fully knowing the language myself, I could be stepping across a line I did not want to. Languages are beautiful and best kept to be learned correctly and spoken (or written) with the best of intentions. 

The actually wording-like edits were basically just cutting the fat and stabbing the point that this sort of outcome is pointless. Very minor, but very much large in the way ti changed the piece. 
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